Writing an action scene-

nihilismpastry:

the-togepi-man:

In your head:

Trying to describe it like:

Okay, but as someone who writes, you really do NOT need to go through blow by blow of actions when writing fights. Fights, in reality, DO NOT LAST LONG. Gun fight, fist fight, sword fight. 15 minutes tops. 

So you shouldn’t have three chapters of nothing but Dudely Dude trying to get Eviley Evil on the floor.